Inquiry & Oral Language Sample

Keynote for pitch Stacey

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Inquiry Reflection

Our question was, 'Why Do Volcanos Exploded?'

Por hypothesis was that lot of hot rocks/ lava in the middle of the earth creates pressure and pops out the top of the volcano.

Our experiment was we had a bottle with vinegar in it and baking soda.

To see if it exploded.

The results was it exploded, so it worked.

Our theory was the vinegar wad the lava and the baking soda was really hot rock and the bottle was the volcano. Our hypothesis was right.

We were good at using our results to make a theory and recording our wonderings.

We could bet better at listening to each others ideas.

School Should Finish At 2pm

Dear Ms Campbell

I think school should finish at 2pm , because if you have swimming on at 3:30 you will not have to rush.

Also you will get a hour longer to get your homework finished.

Its also good because if you have a friend over you might get to play for a hour longer.

Another reason is you will get an extra hour sleep so you wouldn't be cranky

and listen to the teacher better.

From Stacey Lewis

Oral Language

food=tree land

There once was a boy who lived in food=tree land. The boy's name was Max ,this land was not like other's , this land was a land where there were no shop's ,but there was tree's that grew anything. Like chocolate , chip's , lollies and every other food. One day Max saw a grandma Max didn't know that the grandma was a witch she gave Max a lolly pop. After Max finished the lolly pop he fainted, but when he first moved to food=tree land he told his dog if something bad happened to go and get someone, and that's what his dog did. The dog got Max's dad. When Max woke up he said "Thank you boy I never new dogs were so smart".

when the boy went to the forest to find some pine cones he saw a T.V in the middle of nowhere he said to him self "Its the which I will not fall for it this time."

The boy didn't now that someone tried to give him it but they got chased by a bear.

When Salford went to Waverly, my favourite part was the 200 meters because I came 3^rd .My time was 46 seconds. My friend came second , I was thinking that we were going to win the 9 year old girls 200 meters .My second favorite thing was discus , I didn’t like long jump or high jump .my time for the 100 meters was 20 seconds , and my friends time was 19 seconds . At the relays I heard people screaming and I saw that Salford came 1^st for the 800 meters . I was as hot as a wheat bag.

Going To Tauranga

One day in the school holiday’s me and my family went to Tauranga. We stopped at the hotel to unload. Then we went to my B.F.F.s house. I was so excited to see her I was thinking “Hip hip hooray. Its Chelsea. Me and Chelsea started to play. After a few minutes we started laughing, for no reason. We had tea there and a sleep over. It was the best family trip ever.